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Kilby Austin's avatar

I like this a lot but the two lines that have eleven syllables don’t have to. If you drop the ending off “hidden” and the indefinite article before “ever-knowing wisdom” you wouldn’t change the meaning at all, and the sound would only change slightly.

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Sam Downey-Higgins's avatar

Brilliant synesthetic conceit, really well executed. Thanks for this one Thomas.

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