Cerulean Sky (Lenner Gogli)
No serious poet ever said "cerulean" When all he really meant to say was "blue", For then he'd be less poet, more Epicurean And to his own self pleasure would be true. A word, it must be undeniable To pierce the veil of doubt and wound the soul, And to that end, the simple and reliable Locutions of our parlance bear the toll Of many a deep and perspicacious thought: So clear they rise to glorious cliché, And stand against those men who think they ought To grandiloquilate to have their say. All this to say, my lyrics can't contest With what "I love you" says, and would say, best.
I love this poem.
That you used perspicacious and grandiloquilate in a way that felt inevitable and metrically fitting in a poem lauding simplicity is too delicious. I love everything about this one.