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Marie Alvarenga's avatar

This really is a very moving poem. "And no one stood with him." and I can just see him staring into the depths there.

Ann Collins's avatar

A clod of earth gave way and fell

Upon the casket lid. The one inside

Heard not the lonely thud it made

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The clod and the thud. Always the most difficult moment for me at a funeral of a loved one.

You didn't hide from it here. Visceral and graceful.

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